Mmmm . . . desert time. Gonna have to pull up the original version to compare both. :Pulls:
:Bunny debates growing larger with addition of smutt. . . :
O_O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! . . . . :Bunny assesses the new opening. Plot-bunny can work with that. So. Very. Well, with that and the juxtaposition of the old opening.:
So many new little details . . :nibbles at the tasty details: (And I saw what you did with your icons there. Ohohohohoho~ )
Dragging . . . Germany's name into this. . . . :melts and then rolls around in the new addition of narrative. Plot-bunny is also pleased, and nibbles at details/mechanics of the story.: <3<3<3<3<3
Offering to organize . . . for Germany . . . . :Happy spasms all over the place, followed by a large amount of incoherent 'squeeing'. Plot-bunny seems to have been enriched by the details added, including the offer made to Germany. Bunny is happy, and hops off to do bunny things of mayhem:
Soooooooooooooooooooooooo . . . .
good. <3
Ah, all the little changes made for a much smoother narrative. And some additional humor at the end. Overall, so much angst-love for this part.
And the ending still kills.
That's probably where that big black 'lop' with the red eyes and the fangs comes in . . .
:Indicated bunny continues to assimilate smaller shadows into its body, just because it looks freaky and gives it more fuel for the growing plot:
Ah . . . I don't think that I'll be able to match this, but I will do my best and link to you what inadequate trifle I can dream up.
Goodnight not-so-anon. I'm off to have happy dreams again. ^_^
:Bunny goes in search of on-line translators, because oh yeah, he knows what to call himself.:
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
:Drag-drag-sneak-stalk:
Date: 2009-02-14 11:18 am (UTC):Bunny debates growing larger with addition of smutt. . . :
O_O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! . . . . :Bunny assesses the new opening. Plot-bunny can work with that. So. Very. Well, with that and the juxtaposition of the old opening.:
So many new little details . . :nibbles at the tasty details: (And I saw what you did with your icons there. Ohohohohoho~ )
Dragging . . . Germany's name into this. . . . :melts and then rolls around in the new addition of narrative. Plot-bunny is also pleased, and nibbles at details/mechanics of the story.: <3<3<3<3<3
Offering to organize . . . for Germany . . . . :Happy spasms all over the place, followed by a large amount of incoherent 'squeeing'. Plot-bunny seems to have been enriched by the details added, including the offer made to Germany. Bunny is happy, and hops off to do bunny things of mayhem:
Soooooooooooooooooooooooo . . . .
good. <3
Ah, all the little changes made for a much smoother narrative. And some additional humor at the end. Overall, so much angst-love for this part.
And the ending still kills.
That's probably where that big black 'lop' with the red eyes and the fangs comes in . . .
:Indicated bunny continues to assimilate smaller shadows into its body, just because it looks freaky and gives it more fuel for the growing plot:
Ah . . . I don't think that I'll be able to match this, but I will do my best and link to you what inadequate trifle I can dream up.
Goodnight not-so-anon. I'm off to have happy dreams again. ^_^
:Bunny goes in search of on-line translators, because oh yeah, he knows what to call himself.: