Completely stunning. I can't even completely describe how good of a job you did showing the explosion, and I say 'showing' because that's what it felt like. Like the audience was seeing something they maybe weren't really supposed to see, a peek at something we're too small to completely understand but we're awed by it all the same. That's what reading this was like. What an atomic bomb looks like going off is as deeply and intimately beautiful as it is horrifying, and I think you really captured that awesomely in this. I'm dreading the next chapters but at the same time I can't wait. Engh.