ext_366213 ([identity profile] miss-chella.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] pyrrhiccomedy 2009-08-22 03:20 pm (UTC)

Dear God, this was beautiful. And it was so short! Not to critize, i'm just surprised at this chapter. The whole thing was like "Okay, importantstuffimportantsuffhumorimportantstuff--WOAH." Did that make sense? It's like you sped up time just for the impact of the bomb to dazzle and terrify us that much more. Really great stuff. I can't wait for the coming angst.

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