Wow this was so lovely! This was your first time writing France/UK? It sounds like you've been writing it since the day you were born!!
I loved every word of it. Every little fidget, glance, smile, stare, and so on was drenched in their individual characters. Their discussion was very interesting as well, especially with their point of views, once again, sounding very in-character.
This was wonderful, and as a fellow France/UK writer, I have to say I've been thoroughly inspired. It kind of made me pause for a minute and re-analyze their relationship. I mean, they don't fight or curse every second they're with each other. This was really nice as I seem to keep on saying. A really great idea written really, really well. :)
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Date: 2009-07-31 02:58 am (UTC)I loved every word of it. Every little fidget, glance, smile, stare, and so on was drenched in their individual characters. Their discussion was very interesting as well, especially with their point of views, once again, sounding very in-character.
This was wonderful, and as a fellow France/UK writer, I have to say I've been thoroughly inspired. It kind of made me pause for a minute and re-analyze their relationship. I mean, they don't fight or curse every second they're with each other. This was really nice as I seem to keep on saying. A really great idea written really, really well. :)